can someone help to add more letters in my script. my teacher told me that my script was short.

EXT. HOUSE - MORNING

One day, his family decided to go camping.
(John) was really excited to go and upon
reaching there.

EXT. FOREST - NIGHT

(John)
decided to make the vacation more
adventurous.

so we snuck out in the middle of the night to
walk in the forest.
But after a while, fear started creeping
into our minds.
So we decided it was enough and told (John) we
should head back.

EXT. SCARY FOREST - NIGHT
But after walking for some time
(John)
realized we were lost. We pancited and could not think
straight, we started shouting for help.

When no one responded, we decided to just sit through and wait.
After
several minutes, we heard a rambling in the trees only to
find out that his family had come looking for us.

We were really grateful upon seeing our family.