Please helppppp. Pretend that the sample essay, "Punishments in Dante's Inferno," is the first draft of an assignment you
wrote. Go over the essay and revise it to make it easier to understand, more accurate, and more
professional. The sample essay is available in your writing guide for the previous activity, "Revise an
Analysis Essay."
Your assignment should include the following elements:
• A single, debatable thesis that makes it clear what your position is
• Better use of evidence and commentary to back up major points
• A consistent tone and an improved level of formality in the writing
• Clear indications of a solid understanding of Dante's Inferno and its historical context
• A revised introduction that grabs readers' attention with a trope or scheme and presents the thesis
• A revised body that is divided into multiple paragraphs, each of which is clearly about a separate
supporting point
• A revised conclusion that reminds readers of the thesis and major points and leaves them with a
lasting impression
You should have completed a draft of this assignment in the activity before this one. If you haven't done
so, go back and complete that activity now.