Is my writing for this email, correct? I mean academy and grammar. (you can edit and add any sentence).
( I want you to reformulate it in a better way).
Note: The answer should be written in "Word", not in handwriting.
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Dear Mr. Jonathan,
Greetings!
As I told you in my previous email, I got a laptop from the university, but in fact, I think a desktop computer is better to use, so I wanted to please replace the laptop with a desktop computer. What is the way and can you help me with that?.
Sincerely,
Ali