Qn 3. This paragraph is difficult to follow because sentences are poorly sequenced. Rewrite the paragraph, rearranging the sentences to make it easier to understand. Remember to proofread your writing. Confusing paragraph
It's a wonder we didn't get food poisoning. For example, the sausages were burned and the chicken was undercooked. One thing that I did not like about camp was Jack's terrible cooking. Next time I'll check on everyone's skills and experience before I choose my camp group! ​