can you highlight were sensory details are in this essay, and tell were else they need to be added?To go on a family trip is more than the food you eat or money you spend, it's about the memories, each moment a valuable memory in the timeline of our lives. Exploring the crazy towns we go, pave the way for family laughter, fun, and bonds. To be able to share the adventures with family. Out of all the events that I have done in my life, A good family trip sticks out in my memories and amazing adventures. Going on a family trip can build strong connections and long lasting memories.
As it started off,I first saw I was going to play in Orlando. I was over filled with excitement. Just the thought of relaxing by the pool in between my basketball games could not sound any better. As I was slamming clothes in my bag to pack for the trip my mother came into my room to let me know we were going to leave in twenty minutes. We packed up the car and hit the road. Along the way down to Florida we stopped by a restaurant that reminded me of a knock off version of Cracker Bell. After we ate a delicious meal we got back on the road with five hours left. For the rest of the way I watched netflix and slept. When I woke up we had officially made it to our hotel and started to unload our bags. Along the way down there being in the car and stopping at restaurants made a good time to make memories and connect with my family.
After I got to the hotel, the design of the hotel was breathtaking. When we got up to the room my siblings and I jumped into our swimsuits and bolted to the pool. At the pool area there was a waterslide,concession stand, hot tub, and ping pong table which made fun for competitive siblings like us. The feeling of the tropical breeze as my sister and I were tanning by the pool made me feel lucky to have them by my side. As the sun faded I needed to head up to the room to take a shower and get some sleep since I had to wake up early for my basketball game. I woke up at seven a.m. to get a nutritious breakfast and then head off to my game. When my family and I got to the arena we headed straight for my court because my team was already warming up. As the final seconds of my game were wrapping up we were down by one point. As I had the ball in my hand, dribbling down the court, I pulled up at the three point line and made the shot right at the buzzer. The crowd went wild. Although everyone was cheering, the only people I could really hear was my family. After we shook hands with the opposing team, I was surrounded by my family as they rejoiced and congratulated me. When we got back to the hotel my parents let me know we all were going to Universal Studios. After hearing those news all I could think about was how much I was going to be able to bond with my family.
The next morning my whole family woke up with a rush of joy as we were going to Universal Studios that day. Everyone got ready with a smile on their face and ran out the door. Upon arriving at the amusement park we stopped at a waffle house and filled up our stomachs. As we were standing in line to enter the park, my siblings and I took a cute picture to save for memories. After we got in the place was packed with people from all over and smells that would make your nose smile. The first roller coaster we went on was The Hulk. My older sister and I rode side by side as we went in a complete circle, one that makes butterflies in your stomach. After we got off the roller coaster I was slightly off balance due to all the motions my body just had gone through and my mom walked me to the drink machine to get water. After all the amazing fun we had, we headed back to the hotel to gather our things because we had a long trip back home the next day. When we woke up the next morning and headed home I thanked my parents and family for making this trip the most memorable trip I've ever gone on.
As I conclude this paper, it gives me cherishable memories that a good family trip is not in the places we go or the things we do, but it is in the memories and bonds we make while we do it. These treasurable memories and strong bonds lead me to remember that going on my family trips will always be something I look forward to.
