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Can I have some critique on my poem?
Our focus is on concrete detail and rhythm/meter.
Thank you so much.

The poem doesn't represent my views- its for an ELA assignment on the theme on how discrimination has a bad effect.

Can I have some critique on my poem Our focus is on concrete detail and rhythmmeter Thank you so much The poem doesnt represent my views its for an ELA assignme class=