This is an opinion essay. Write your own thoughts. I can't help you in this case, because, obviously I'm not you. However, a tip for this assignment would be to not use too many compound sentences (Instead of "She hurried down the street as fast as she could, but still was late", say, "She hurried down the street as fast as she could. She was devastated to find out that she was still late.") and add many sentences to support your ideas.
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