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Read the sentence.

Our math team members are called The Math Magicians, and they have won every competition so far this year.

Which revision best corrects the faulty coordination in the sentence?

A. The Math Magicians are our math team members, and they have won every competition so far this year.

B. Our math team members, the Math Magicians, have won every competition so far this year.

C. The Math Magicians are what our math team members are called, and they have won every competition so far this year.

D. The Math Magicians have won every competition so far this year, and they are the members of our math team.

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The correct answers are (A) and (B). In sentence (A), the writer maintains the coordinator “, and” but the sentence is rearranged in order to avoid wordiness. In sentences (B) the writer introduces and apposite phrase between comas.

The last three phrases because you can visualize the lightning hitting the tree and hear the sounds of thunder.

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