We are supposed to rewrite this sentence in order to correct the error in pronoun reference. A possibility is the following:
- When Shelly called, she told her sister about the new baby.
- The problem with the original sentence concerns pronoun reference.
- The pronouns "she" and "her" are unclear as to whom they refer.
- In other words, who told whom about the baby? Did Shelly tell her sister, or did the sister tell Shelly?
- One way to correct that is by replacing "her" with the noun it is supposed to refer to.
- If we choose to say that "her" refers to sister, we can rewrite the sentence as: "When Shelly called, she told her sister about the new baby."
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