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So I'm writing an essay and I would like someone to proof read and edit it. The intoduction is suppised to be grabbing, but im not aure if i made it too long.

So Im writing an essay and I would like someone to proof read and edit it The intoduction is suppised to be grabbing but im not aure if i made it too long class=

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I wouldn't repeat sudden.

I would take out was, it isn't needed because you explained your actions in the previse sentence

found instead of find

However, you hear the noise a second time. Louder than the first.

That's a start.  I would look up how to write a correct MLA style paper

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