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Read the sentence. After sampling a few cake samples, the woman who is getting married picked the flavor of cake that she liked the best. Which answer choice is the best revision of the sentence to avoid repetition?
A. After sampling a few cake samples, the bride picked the best flavor.
B. After tasting cake samples, the bride picked the best flavor.
C. After tasting the cakes, the woman getting married picked the best cake flavor.
D. The sentence is correct as written.

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bridebenson007

The answer is B)

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GeoPanther

The correct answer is B.

In the original sentence sampling/samples are repeated which is unnecessary. In addition the woman who is getting married can be simplified down to 'the bride'. The word cake doesn't need to be repeated again also. So the simplified version of the original sentence without repetition would be 'After tasting cake samples, the bride picked the best flavor'.

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