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10-03-2019
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Please help me revise this argumentative essay thesis for AP Lang?

"While chief Joseph did protect his tribe's tradition, his true courage showed when he chose to surrender his beliefs on order to protect the same people from which his tradition rooted."

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10-03-2019

This is a good thesis. I do believe you made a spelling error it’s “ in order to” not “on order to”

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