I am writing to your company to apply for the position of
customer service representative, which I originally saw on
your company website, and which is advertised there
What makes the style of this sentence ineffective?
O
A. The sentence is too formal.
O
B. The sentence is too informal.
C. The sentence is too wordy.
O
D. The sentence is too personal.
E PREVIOUS

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Answer:C

Explanation:

Wayyyy too wordy. Says too much in one run-on. Could be broken up into 2/3 smaller sentences

Answer:

c. the sentence is to wordy

Explanation: