The “Read Books, Share the Love” advertisement effectively convinces people to read more books. The advertisement targets parents of young children. In the ad, a mother and father are reading a book to their two young children. Most parents certainly would want their children to do well academically. This ad effectively encourages literacy.

Which of the following revisions would most improve this paragraph?
A. correcting punctuation and spelling errors
B. better explaining the target audience
C. discussing techniques used in the ad
D. reorganizing the order of the content