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How can I write a thesis about a car accident???


"On Saturday evening I was sitting on my couch reading a book. Suddenly I heard sirens and I was obviously curious to see what was going on. I got up to look out my window so I could see what was happening. I got there just in time to see everything that happened, it was really crazy. I walked back to my couch so I could continue to read my book but right when I sat down, there was a knock at my door. It was a police officer asking me if I saw what happened. "


This is my story so far, how can I add a thesis to this?? (Its about a car accident for my english class)

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Anwer: I would say that you have a thesis it's just that you could add more detail to it.

This is what I would say:

It was a cold, dark Saturday evening. I was reading my favorite book (enter here), when I heard sirens wailing outside my house. I got up from the couch, curious to see what was going on.  

Extra Notes:

I would also add on to your story about about what you saw outside of your window.

Hope this helps (:

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