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Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach, focusing on addressing what is most significant for a specific purpose and audience.

Rewrite this dull sentence to make it dazzling.

Nathan listened to music.

Respuesta :

Previous sentence: "Nathan listened to music."

New Sentence: Nathan enjoyed listening to today's popular melodies because of its favorable frequencies and pitch that made him dance and jump around his house.

I hoped this helped in brightening the sentence and more fun to read.


sarkhan2018

The processes described in the question show how can we expand the sentence from many different aspects. Nathan listened to music is a given sentence. We can add information regarding when Nathan listened music, how he was listening, what was he listening to and what was his purpose. A possible example is: Nathan was listening to pop music on Saturdays while he was relaxing.

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