Can i have some good feed back on the story i am writing for my English Class...? You will be super helpful..!!!
Here a few parts of my story not the full thing but lmk what you think...?
I skipped a part but its just a peek of it ... its not done yet

Can i have some good feed back on the story i am writing for my English Class You will be super helpful Here a few parts of my story not the full thing but lmk class=
Can i have some good feed back on the story i am writing for my English Class You will be super helpful Here a few parts of my story not the full thing but lmk class=