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The writer could best revise the passage to make it stronger by

adding a claim about the dangers of travel.
adding a thesis to introduce the topic of cows.
adding a quotation from Hughes about the events.
adding a summary of the details using different words.

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Answer:

adding a thesis to introduce the topic of cows.

Explanation:

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The writer could revise the passage to make it stronger by adding a thesis to introduce the topic of cows. This creates interest in the mind of the audience.

What is thesis in writing?

Thesis is the statement that covers the main point of the text or the content which is written in the chapter or essay. It is a central point of the paper with the main idea.

It comes at the end of the introduction part, for example if the person is writing about women empowerment then thesis is how can we encourage more women.

Thus, option B is correct

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