Respuesta :
Answer: Could I give a suggestion? :D
Explanation: I changed it a bit, how about...
"It's the afternoon and I feel the cool breeze of Fall rush through my hair as it passes right by me."
Answer: Could I give a suggestion? :D
Explanation: I changed it a bit, how about...
"It's the afternoon and I feel the cool breeze of Fall rush through my hair as it passes right by me."