In the thesis statement "It is insane how many head injuries happen in football games each year and nobody does anything about it" an academic tone is missing.
What is an academic tone?
"Academic Tone is a professional sound that gives written work a polished feeling."
In the thesis statement "It is insane how many head injuries happen in football games each year and nobody does anything about it" an academic tone is missing because an academic tone does not contain emotional elements but in the statement the phrase "nobody does anything about it" depicts writer's emotions and seems informal. The phrase is seeming as if the writer is really concerned about the injuries that happen every year. Instead of appealing to the readers emotions the statement is highlighting writers own personal emotions and feelings.
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