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Which of the following thesis statements is the strongest?

Making homemade ice cream is a lot of fun and really easy to do.
Making homemade ice cream involves gathering the right ingredients, carefully regulating temperatures, and the creation of friction.
This essay will talk about how to make homemade ice cream from start to finish.
In this essay, you will learn how to choose the right ingredients, carefully regulate temperature, and create friction to make homemade ice cream.

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simplymandi

Answer:

Making homemade ice cream involves gathering the right ingredients, carefully regulating temperatures, and the creation of friction

Explanation:

strong thesis statements (and essays in general) should not include phrases like "you will learn..." and "this essay is about...", and the first thesis statement is rather an opinion and not a fact.

The second statement not only provides an elaborate yet short answer on how to make homemade ice cream but is also based on facts.

Answer:

I'm pretty sure it's D.

Explanation:

I think it's D because it basically summarizes everything up in a very short and sweet way, which is basically the point of a thesis, and it's worded very well. I'm sorry if it's not D I haven't taken this quiz yet. If its not D try B

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