IM WRITING AN INFORMATIVE ESSAY AND I DO NOT KNOW IF IM DOING THIS RIGHT!!!!!! IF YOU SEE ANY PROBLEMS PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!!

Dan and Christopher are just some friends walking slowly home from school, they slowly part as they walk down the streets there houses were on, suddenly Christopher shouts Dan’s name.
“What?” Dan replied.
“Look at this poster!”-he pointed to a poster hanging on the wall- “a huge circus is in town!”
Dan asked confused “A circus?”
“Yes,” he shouted excitingly. “I love the circus! Let’s go together it’ll be tons of fun, I’ll ask my mom for money to buy the tickets!”
Dan was unsure of himself, “well my mom may not let me go, I have a math test soon and I have to study.”
“Don't be silly!” Christopher shouted, “I’ll give you the tickets tomorrow at lunch, the circus is in three days so don't lose them!”