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Answer: Don't say portal
Explanation: When I read the word portal it made it sound like a story for a kindergartener instead put "they pushed her out of the flames reach" or something similar to that. Maybe a bit more detail about Fawn and how she lived and why the King came to the forest. Other than that it is a great story.
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after dwelled there, capitalize the T in the. after seventh b day, put a comma. a comma after arrived. Capitalize T in they. All she had left was the insignia etched pendant her parents gave her before pushing her through a portal that LAY just outside the forest.
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Nice story, really like it. Very detailed.