Answer:
Well, they're all great! But, I think you should tab at the beginning of each paragraph. Also, maybe add the symptoms. More importantly, you should add an introduction and closing paragraph. Don't forget transition words like, "in the first place, not only ... but also, as a matter of fact, in like manner, in addition, coupled with, in the same fashion/way, first, second, third, in the light of, not to mention, and hundreds more."
Explanation:
It's just correct and it'll be interesting.
