GIVING BRAINLIEST!!!!!!!!

George Washington was very well known and people looked up to him because he led the army.

Read the revised sentence: George Washington, an accomplished general in the Revolutionary War, was respected and admired for his leadership of the Continental Army.

Why did the writer revise the sentence in this way?

A) To add specific factual details
B) To make the sentence longer
C) To include a transition word
D) To put ideas in a logical order