She notices an error in grammar in the first paragraph of the text. Find the error and replace it with the correct verb form.<br /><br /> It is very important to train your dog. It keeps your dog's mind active, and it helps to build an understanding between you and your dog. Often, owners will shout at their dogs or even punish them when what is needed is effective training.
I don't see any errors. I've read it over a few times and really looked, but, I'm not seeing anything wrong. And, sure, there are different ways to write this paragraph, but, I don't see anything wrong with the way it is written right now.
