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Read the text and answer the questions that follow.
Elizabeth shivered as the wind howled outside the unfamiliar cabin. She hovered at the tiny window, anxiously searching for a glimpse
of her father. The twilight was fading fast; if Father did not hurry he would be trying to find his way back to their isolated new home in the dark
Earlier in the day. Elizabeth had unpacked their few belongings. Ashlight fell, something banged against the side of the cabin, rattling the dishes stacked by the empty fireplace, and Elizabeth jumped.
Which sentence should be deleted to improve the overall organization of the scene? Why? How could this sentence be revised to fit into the
existing organization of the scene?

Respuesta :

annyksl

The sentence "if Father did not hurry he would be trying to find his way back to their..." may be deleted to improve the overall organization of the scene.

We can arrive at this answer because

  • The text refers to a moment of tension in which Elizabeth finds herself, showing how the environment is affecting her.
  • In that case, the sentence about Elizabeth's father can be excluded, as the text focuses on the suspense surrounding her.
  • This would make the text more direct and objective.

This sentence can be revised to show how she worried and was afraid of her father's absence.

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