The peer needs to change the following in this passage: She should change eloquently because this is an adverb and most brave because that is the incorrect form of this comparable adjective.
Eloquently, which is an adverb that shows the manner in which something happened should be changed and replaced with the adjective, Eloquent.
An adjective is proper because it modifies the noun, gift, in the sentence. Most brave should also be replaced with bravest.
Bravest is the superlative adjective that fits best into the description.
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