My brother and I used to hate each other we often argued over every thing. Although as we got older.
Things got good. I feel like our relationship is good now. Sometimes the old arguments effect our current arguments. As the oldest I defiantly now try to keep the peace. We both adore dogs. Compromising and truly listening have helped our relationship alot.

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