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Refer to the model essay to answer the following question: What is wrong with the following sentence? #2 Armand, on the other hand, has no interest at all in cowboy cards and seems to Jerry, who is acting like a big loser, to be growing more and more distant from him. “He had recently become a stranger to me in many ways,” Jerry notes (231).

A) The writer uses slang, which is inappropriate in an academic essay


B) The sentence is choppy and needs to be combined with the sentence before it

C) The subject/verb agreement is incorrect D) The meaning of the sentence is unclear

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After analyzing the sentence of the essay and locating what is wrong with it, we can select the following option:

A) The writer uses slang, which is inappropriate in an academic essay.

Using slang in an essay

It is inappropriate to use slang in an academic essay. This type of writing has the purpose of conveying information in a formal and often unbiased manner. By calling someone a "loser", the author would be writing in an informal and biased way.

With the information above in mind, we can choose letter A as the best option. The sentence itself has no other issues besides the use of "loser".

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