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Hey. I’m playing in a tennis match next week for the college. I’ve got all my gear ready and a brand new racquet. It’s at the college’s sports hall. The light system there is great. The match begins at 10 am and it’s free to come and watch. It would be great if you could come along and support me.

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I hope you have good luck and win!!!

There are two unnecessary sentences in this paragraph; they are:

  • I’ve got all my gear ready and a brand new racquet.
  • The light system there is great.

What is the text about

The text is an invitation to a tennis match. So the crucial information in it should be:

  • Date: I’m playing in a tennis match next week for the college
  • Location: It’s at the college’s sports hall.
  • Time: The match begins at 10 am.
  • Cost: it’s free to come and watch.

That is why talking about:

  • the gear and new equipment
  • lighting

is not information that the reader needs.

The correct text

Hey. I’m playing in a tennis match next week at the college. It’s at the college’s sports hall. The match begins at 10 am, and it’s free to come and watch. It would be great if you could come along and support me.

Learn more about invitations here:

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