To review the paragraph, Raoul needs to reread what was written and identify inconsistencies and poorly structured sentences.
To review a text, it is necessary to reread it, looking for errors, inconsistencies, and any type of problem that could compromise the reading and comprehension of the text.
You did not show Raoul's text, which prevents a review from being made. However, the question was answered taking its context into account.
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