Answer: Use pronouns like
I (singular personal pronoun in the subjective case)
we (plural personal pronoun in the subjective case)
me (singular personal pronoun in the objective case)
us (plural personal pronoun in the objective case)
mine and ours (singular and plural possessive pronouns)
Explanation:
Tip 1: Write an opening like Melville. Let the reader know you’re using a first-person narrative right away as Melville did in the opening line of Moby D with “Call me Ishmael.” Introduce the narrator’s voice within the first two paragraphs to create a bond with your readers from the start.
Tip 2: Create a strong narrator. Make your first-person narrator an interesting character to make the story really work. Give them a strong voice and a solid backstory that influences their perspective.
Tip 3: 2. Stay in character. When using the pronoun “I,” it’s easy to slip out of your character’s voice and into your own as the author. When you’re writing, stay true to your POV character’s voice.
Things not to do in first-person writing:
Tip 1: Don’t start every sentence with “I.” Starting every line with “I” can become repetitive; vary your sentences by illustrating thoughts or feelings. Instead of writing “I felt tired walking through the deep snow,” try “The mountain was buried in snow, making every step feel like a mile.”
Tip 2: Avoid obvious tags. In first person, avoid phrases that take the reader out of the character’s thoughts—for example, “I thought” or “I felt.” While one of the advantages of first-person writing is knowing what the narrator is thinking, don’t get stuck in the character’s head. We also want to see through their eyes, so use visual language to show the reader around their world.
Tip 3: Your main character doesn’t always have to narrate. It’s easy to assume that your protagonist should be your narrator in a first-person story, but that shouldn’t always be the case. In first-person peripheral, the narrator is a witness to the story, but they are not the main character. In The Great Gatsby, F. Scott Fitzgerald created the character of Nick, who tells the story of Jay Gatsby trying to win the love of Nick’s cousin, Daisy. Telling the story this way keeps the focus on the protagonist but also creates some distance, so the reader is not privy to their thoughts or feelings.
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