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How is the Life of a Firefly Like the Life Cycle of a Firefly

A glow illuminates from deep within the woods, it floats around just evading your every move, being 1 step ahead at all times. What could this be? An otherworldly creature, a being sent from deep space? Well its the humble firefly, this creatures lifespan carely lasts longer than the bursts of light that it creates but in that time magical things can happen. Not too dissimilar to ours.
The life of firefly will always begin amongst hundreds of others. This part of their life is almost identical to hundreds of thousands of other creatures. But would you think that it is the same as us as well? Our lives begin with our parents where shortly after we are left to stay with hundreds of other infants for hours on end. Beings that will live completely different lives start out the same way.
Well that was a given but how about other stages of a firefly's life how are they similar to ours? The first few seconds of their life like many will be incredibly strange and alien. Their first instincts will be to look for food and survive. And a child at birth will cry and scream for being taken out of their home and placed into a loud, bright, and cold world. Then they will reach for the mother for comfort and nurture. And like the larvae all they will do for the first major part of their life will be to eat sleep and grow.
After a few months of growing in this fashion only a month or so will remain of the firefly's life. This is when they are practically grown. This is when the firefly will start to mate and start to procreate and make offspring of their own to recreate the process. A person, many of their desires would be to have children and this would take place from their 20s to their 60s. The person, in this case, would have gone through their childhood and would either already have children or are in the process of having them. The firefly after laying/mating will soon die after the offspring are laid and would be like a person in their late stages of life close to death.
From death to life, to the end of it all the life of a firefly is fairly similar to a person. A creature whose “life” is a blink of an eye to us has just as much meaning and just as much is accomplished.