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Answer the following questions as completely as possible with specific details:

Does my essay focus on one big idea that I want my target audience to understand? Do I have a clear purpose?
Do I have enough supporting ideas in my essay to convince a reader that my ideas are correct?
Do I have supporting facts in my essay that aren't really related to that one big idea?
Is my argument completely logical? Do I commit any logical fallacies?
What changes would you make to your essay if you were to write it over again?