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Read the paragraph and answer the question that follows:
The town of Belmond, Iowa, needs to add weather sirens. The loud and steady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger. If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives. With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately.
Which sentence should be revised to eliminate redundancy? (10 points)

The town of Belmond, Iowa, needs to add weather sirens.

The loud and steady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger.

If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives.

With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately.

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avm712
The answer is: With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately. 
mcarc09

Answer:

I believe the best answer to be the second option: If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives.

Explanation:

The word history can be defined as a sequence of past events connected to something or someone, or even the study of such past events. It is redundant to say "past history", since the word history already has "past" as an inner characteristic of its meaning.

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