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Which is the best way to revise the following sentences?
Mary and Bill both liked modern painting. Naturally, they both chose a museum as their first date.
1) Mary and Bill both liked modern painting going to a museum, seemed like a natural choice for their first date.
2) Mary and Bill both liked modern painting; going to a museum seemed like a natural choice for their first date.
3) Mary and Bill, both liked modern painting going to a museum seemed like a natural choice for their first date.
4) Mary and Bill, both liked modern painting, going to a museum seemed like a natural choice for their first date.

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It's choice number one because a comma shouldn't be used after Mary and Bill so the last two are wrong. Choice number two has a semicolon and we don't use that in this sentence. 
The correct answer is number two, they are two sentences that could stand alone but are joined by a semicolon.

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