which comment is an example constructive feedback
A. The ending of your essay didnt make sense. Why dont you add something exciting?
B. No one likes reading essays about dogs. Try picking maybe a different topic- maybe something about dating.
C. This section isnt very descriptive. Try adding more adjectives to help describe your dog or his habits.
D. You didnt choose the right words, so your essay wasnt clear. Can you find better ones?

Respuesta :

C because the reader is telling you what's wrong and giving you directions on how to fix what you have.

The correct answer is C. This section isn't very descriptive. Try adding more adjectives to help describe your dog or his habits.

Explanation:

Constructive feedback is a judgment about some text or work that allows the author to know which aspects of his or her work are right and which ones need improvement and in which ways. Because of this constructive feedback implies praising, but also some criticism that supports an improvement or correction process and that is usually linked to specific suggestions on how to improve the aspects that are criticized.This means these type of feedback or judgments construct as they aim at improving and correcting instead of destroying with just criticism. Considering this, the best example of constructive feedback is "This section isn't very descriptive. Try adding more adjectives to help describe your dog or his habits" because it is clear which aspect of the work needs improvement, instead of criticizing rudely or saying all the work is wrong and also it provides suggestions on how to improving which helps the author to improve the work, also, the language use is aimed at helping rather than criticizing or destroying the work which is what the constructive feedback is about.