Can someone help me come up with a thesis statement on an essay i wrote where i have to analyze the causes and effects of colonization throughout the British Empire by examining its geography, economics, and culture, during the age of imperialism.

I wrote it twice but my teacher said the thesis statement isn't good enough so i really need help.

Respuesta :

What are generally your options about this situation during the essay?  What interests you about the geography, economy, and the culture of this age. Write your statement on how all these make you feel. A thesis statement is about your opinion so there should be no right or wrong answer, just about how you feel in this situation.