For her English class, Donna wrote an essay about learning to dance. She wants to revise the essay to post it on the dance school's website. What should Donna change?

A. She should compare her experiences learning to dance with learning soccer.
B. She should add a persuasive focus to help convince people to sign up for classes.
C. She should add sensory details to help readers relate to her struggle to master certain steps.
D. She should include other students' experiences that are different from hers.