Characters:
Ellie (the one that gets into trouble)
Mrs. Black (the teacher)
Points:
Ellie put pins in a chair
Ellie got in trouble
Rough draft:
Ellie thought it would be funny if she inserted pins into her teacher's chair. 5 minutes after the bell rung for class, Mrs. Black sat down on her chair to take attendance. She sat on pins. Mrs. Black took Ellie to the principal's office and she got ISS for two days.
Final copy:
On the last day of school, Ellie thought she would pull a prank on the most horrid teacher, Mrs. Black. Ellie brought in little pins to the class and started to insert them into her teacher's chair. (I'm not done but i have to go, ill finish)