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Read the following paragraph.

The “Read Books, Share the Love” advertisement effectively convinces people to read more books. The advertisement targets parents of young children. In the ad, a mother and father are reading a book to their two young children. Most parents certainly would want their children to do well academically. This ad effectively encourages literacy.

Which of the following revisions would most improve this paragraph?
correcting punctuation and spelling errors
better explaining the target audience
discussing techniques used in the ad
reorganizing the order of the content

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agentflane239
Discussing techniques used in the ad. The paragraph explains the target audience with correct grammar and the order of the content is fine. The paragraph doesn't discuss what techniques the ad used to be successful, however. 

The revision that would most improve this paragraph is C. discussing techniques used in the ad.

What is revision?

It should be noted that revision simply means a concise statement that's given about an event or happening.

In this case, the revision that would most improve this paragraph is to discuss techniques that are used in the ad.

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