So I’m doing for my aunt a favor. She’s going to have a work test tomorrow and it’s request to write a response letter for a friend and visit them in a specific time and I’m writing it now and I need someone to check it out for me if I use grammar wrong or not nature :
Dear...
Thanks for the letter you sent me last week. I’m glad to hear that you very missed me .Im thinking about visiting your house this Saturday at 7o’clock and we could have a slumber party if you wanted to !
Love
.........

Respuesta :

You could start it a little bit stronger like
Dear ....
I'm so happy to have received a letter from you its been a long time since we talked.

You also put very in between you and missed which makes the sentence not make sense. You should also change the you in the second sentence to you've