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[1] It amazes me that a week ago, only seven days prior to the big event, I was so worried that my camp presentation on conservation would be a big flop. [2] A teacher once told me that if you grab the audience’s attention at the very beginning, they’ll be hooked. [3] She was right. [4] I began my presentation by showing how a solar cell and a simple wire powered by the sun could use the sun’s powerful rays to make a fan spin.

What is the best revision of sentence 4?

I began my presentation by showing how a solar cell and a wire could use the sun’s rays to make a fan spin.

I began by using a solar cell and a simple wire powered by the sun’s rays to use the sun’s power and make a fan spin.

Using a simple wire and a solar cell, I began by showing how to use the sun’s powerful rays to make a fan spin.

answer is the first one!!

Respuesta :

The answer is the first one because it elimantes the redundancy that makes the original sentence hard to read.

To be redundant is to state information more than necessary, and in the original sentence the fact that the sun's rays are powering the wire and the fan is stated twice.

Answer:

A)

I began my presentation by showing how a solar cell and a wire could use the sun’s rays to make a fan spin.

Explanation:

correct on edge 2021