Anyone that is really good at writing essay's.) Can someone look over my essay and help me add alittle more detail) " I have 370 words need 400). ( I POSTED A PICTURE OF WHAT I WROTE DOWN). " My teacher said I need to included - (Extremely vivid sensory language, Figurative language, Comparative and /or Superlative adverbs or adjectives, Stong word choice and appropriate voice, Tone and Style. Uses correct mechanics and grammar. She also said I didn't include ( Essay includes no revisions, or the revisions undermine the essay's purpose and weaken the draft. Use correct mechanics and grammar. 0-4 mistakes are present. WILL MARK BRAINLIEST. Need two people to respone so I can Mark Brainliest
