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My group member demonstrated great claims throughout their paper. They had substancial evidence backing up their ideas, all credible. Each sentence was well thought out and developed, making it easier, for me as a reader to understand. I felt as though they responded well to the prompt. Although they had amazing arguments throughout the paper and great evidence, I felt they were lacking in the descriptions of BLANK. I would reccomend to them that they strengthen and emphasise how they incorporate their details after quotes and sources. Aside from the details, their claims were fantastically written.