Don't write a thesis in first person. You shouldn't include the word "I." Trust that the reader already knows that the thesis includes your thoughts. Writing"I think" would be redundant. Instead, write your thesis in third person. Additionally, make sure that the thesis is a complete sentence. Which of the following is the strongest thesis?
A) I believe that space exploration is important.
B) Learning about the universe is awesome.
C) Despite the risks and costs, the US should continue exploring outer space.
D) Many people think that space exploration is important, and I am one of them.

Respuesta :

C) Despite the risks and costs, the US should continue exploring outer space
This is the strongest as it shows your opinion yet keeps the tone formal. It is written in a complete sentence and suggests that you have analysed (or will analyse) outer space exploration in detail
Hey there!

Your answer to this question is C.
Despite the risks and costs, the US should continue exploring outer space.

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